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J**B
Exceptional !!!
First off, I would like to say this is an amazing book, very well written and intense in every way that I like. This book is unique, a one-of-a-kind and I would certainly recommend this book to anyone who is into fetish erotica.-------The basic idea of the plot: pretty much Alice gets taken by a strange green man to some underground mansion, bound and held hostage. The Witch, master of this underworld (not called that name till much later) meets her and teases her with an electric rod. When Alice becomes aroused it turns the Witch off, who gets off by forcing girls into sexual lunacy - she doesn't want girls that actually enjoy the act, least not at first. Alice turns out to be a dirty girl who watches way too much porn and is obsessed with fetish sex (even though she herself never dares to participate in it, even alone). So all the things that happened (and will happen) to her are fantasies she never could have.Using her wits and unusual calm in her situation(s) Alice escapes her initial bounds and beings roaming the grounds, everything and everyone she meets wants to have sex with her, some forcing her into it but some she does willingly figuring sex would be better than being called out by the person asking, and thus ending back in the Witches hands. Most of the people and creatures she encounters get broken "second helpings" to the newcomers, so catching a "freshie" is a big deal--they rather keep Alice to themselves or just have a little fun instead of returning her to the Witch and thus "breaking her". She angers a few people, scares a few people, and gains the respect of others. Friends, foes, companions all show themselves - all tools in her eventual escape - it's not told how she escapes only that from the very first page that she's retelling this story after she had escaped, that she will escape. This is a story of her escape after all.As a reader I was trying to connect the dots, how every sex partner she came in contact and would help her during a second book. This first book was just a set up--introducing the world and the characters in it. Now figuring out how all the pieces complete a puzzle, I'll just have to wait for the second installment.But enough of praising how amazing this book is now, let's look at the hard facts; this book is NOT for everyone, and NOT for the lighthearted. My fingernails are gone and my heart now beats at a slightly faster rate.Now, when I said the book isn't for the lighthearted I mean there are scenes that get pretty intense, expect light gore, less-than-perfect (in appearance) characters, and even on a few occasions death. The story also goes through various fetishes some including electric torture, absurd amounts of come, clit enlargement, BDSM, eggs, vines, wolves (more like werewolves), vore, and dual penetration. These events are shown in a combination of the main character having it happen to them or watching it happen to others. So scenes will vary between first person and a third person perspective.That said, this book is still quite amazing the sex scenes describe every gooey detail and the word variety is exponential, and I absolutely love reading Alice get screwed over and over, filled up repetitively by everything she comes in contact with, and every time I feel a scene was the cream of the crop the next one topped it.-------Summary: totally worth the purchase if you like fetish sex. Be prepared that once you start reading this book, you will not put it down until it's finished. It has had a copyedit to fix typos and other flaws that were required but not relevant to the story's content, minor detail though. Still a 5/5 in my book.This review was edited on 20/11/2012.
C**N
Needs a proper edit
I am familiar with dark & fetish books and was intrigued by the plot of the book. I was extremely disappointed in it and almost couldn't finish. The author gives fair warning of the content, however the content does not flow in a coherent manner and the scenes described are awkward and often left me confused trying to figure out what was going on and what exactly was being described. As for the dark and disturbing context alluded to by the author? Yeah, not so much. Above all however, is the numerous grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors. On the positive side however, great cover!
P**T
Great
So this book reminds me so much of Alice in wonderland. If you like erotica you may like this book. It has a lot of forcing the females into sex. The parts before the ending did not hold my attention. But I still can't wait for the next book to come out. I love how deep Freelove goes into her mind and feelings. This is a guy writing this and it just amazes me what a great writer he can be.
M**S
awesome read
I completely enjoyed reading this book on here and on Wattpad. It was so good that I read it 3 times. I was so happy to see it sold here because I grabbed it right up and put it in my permanent library so I can read it whenever I want to. Can't wait for the sequel to come out!!!!
K**R
Brilliant Thriller Fulfilling All Fantasies
This book blew my mind. The plot line is surprising and twisting. Each page leaves you on the edge of your seat. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys this genre.
N**E
i survived the witch
This book had me unable to sleep until I finished it. Definitely a must read. Cameron Cook is a great new author.
T**E
Amazing.!
This story is phenomenal.! It keeps you on the edge of your seat to know what happens next. The whole story is well written; you wont want to put it down.
E**A
Did not like
There is nothing erotic about this story. Mainly it's just abuse and it's all rather gross. Possibly it could get better after the first couple of chapters, because that was as far as I read before trashing it, but I really don't think so.
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