The Legend Of Captain St. Pierre: 1 (St. Pierre Legacy)

An entertaining read!

DNF @ 22%Needs proper editing before I can continue reading.Examples:1. Bandana or bandanna? It's spelled both ways.2. Missing or added words ("...was not of that of a stately woman" "...it impossible to mistake her...")3. Johnny or Jonny? It's spelled both ways.4. Awkward sentences ("Ayden spoke in a casual manner as Abigail served both Branwyn and him some ale." "...Mako Jon veered their heading towards it.")5. Typos - Gapped instead of gaped. Taught instead of taut.6. Typically I see a problem with too many commas, but in this book they are used so sparingly that there are far too many run-on sentences.There were, however, some passages that I really liked in the 22% of the book I did read:"She contemplated her next words as she took another bite, letting the apple peel fall to the table in a spiral of flesh.""She instantly stopped struggling as her name left his lips.""...you will never put your past to rest. It'll catch up to you as the tide always does."