Walk Among Us: Compiled Edition (Vampire: The Masquerade)
V**.
Awful
Complete garbage.The three stories revolve around newly Embraced Neonates, and in all of them the plot goes nowhere. The main characters are shallow and egocentric simpletons, the dialogs are forced and the arc non-existent.Regarding the writers:1. Gornichec couldn't write to save her life. She has no vocabulary, repeats the same words all along her poorly structured narratives. I'd say she writes at a 7th grade level. Just awful.2. Khaw is way better. Her English is elegant and her narrative fluid. I'd say she's the only pro of the three, and it shows. Regardless, her story is as boring as the others, if not worse. Seriously, it doesn't go beyond a spoiled millennial procrastinating his duties by going to bars and trying to be popular. I'm serious. Another fatal flaw is the rhythm: the author spends 10 pages or so in pointless stuff like the protagonist picking up groceries. And all this doesn't build to anything. It goes nowhere. Pointless, shallow, boring.3. Starling writing isn't a trainwreck like Gornichec, but isn't something worth publishing either. The story takes place in some woky community in Portland and the characters all have this woky social media warrior vibe. In other words, undeserving of anyone's time.What happened to the writers of The Requiem era? Those tales where heavy, deep, involving. The cities of the World of Darkness would pulse, attract and devour the reader's attention, and the vampires were layered monsters whom actually did something throughout their unlives.I'm embarrassed by this book.Shove it in the trash - I'm not passing this disaster forward.
S**D
Tales of ambitious, flawed characters dressed up in vampiric goodness
I had never heard of World of Darkness/Vampire: The Masquerade until I purchased this compilation. I am also not a big fan of vampires. I purchased Walk Among Us due to my love of two of the authors' works. Therefore, I cannot comment on any lore, Easter eggs, or potential consistency errors. Given this is a compilation of three novellas, I will break down this review as such, rating each on a 5-point scale.A Sheep Among Wolves - 4/5It will be nearly impossible for me to "objectively" review this novella because of how unexpectedly close it hit to home. I have read several reviews that have criticized the novella's protagonist, Clea, as being a one-note character defined by her depression. A part of me feels that many of those reviews came from readers who themselves do not have depression, anxiety, or chronically low self-esteem, because as many people with mental illness know, on your worst days/weeks/months/years, you can very easily be defined by your mental illness. This is precisely what made Clea so relatable to me, as reading about her was like reading about myself in my teens through mid-twenties.A Sheep Among Wolves tells the story of a freshman college student who is on a downswing of what she calls depression but very well may be Bipolar Disorder. She cannot make friends, she has no drive or ambition, and her routine mostly consists of fast food/takeout, doing everything she can to avoid socializing, sleeping way too much, and frequently skipping classes (presumably because of the two former "activities"). This being a vampire novella, Clea finds herself caught up in an increasingly bizarre situation that, if she does have Bipolar Disorder, pushes her into a manic episode. (The novella certainly fits a metaphor about living with Bipolar Disorder, anyway.)This story will certainly not be for everyone. Readers who do not live with depression or depression-adjacent mental illnesses may find Clea unrelatable, frustrating, or even a bit boring. For someone like me who lives with depression, has severe social anxiety, and struggled for over a decade with extreme low self-esteem, I was so shook that I literally had to put off doing anything for an entire night and just watch comedy shows to decompress. Just like with her debut novel, The Witch's Heart, Genevieve Gornichec found a way to drill down to the core of my soul and leave me a bit of a mess. Only this time I was not prepared for it.All that being said, the novella is not perfect. Like many, I found the antagonist (of sorts), a bully whose constant target for abuse is Clea, a bit too exaggerated, and the actual vampiric elements almost feel like an afterthought. I could not help but feel like this story would have been better served in its own universe, unbeholden to the lore of its source material. However, I appreciated the ending for the questionable note it ends on, offering a tantalizing topic of discussions for readers willing to dissect Gornichec's intent. To avoid spoilers, I will refrain from sharing my interpretation.Fine Print - N/ALoathe as I am to abandon a story mid-way through, I will be honest and admit that I did not read this novella all the way through. Cassandra Khaw's prose is elegant and provocative, but due to my general indifference toward vampires, and because I could not personally connect with the protagonist or sympathize with his motives, I found myself unable to stick with it. Therefore, it will not be considered in my overall rating. However, if vampires are your thing or you appreciate highly-driven but morally bankrupt protagonists, I would still recommend this novella.The Land of Milk and Honey - 4/5Caitlin Starling has proven herself among my favorite horror authors, and The Land of Milk and Honey only further solidifies her as an author consistently on my radar. This novella tells the story of a vampire running a farm that harvests blood from humans in an effort to feed vampires without having to actually kill humans. It is a welcome twist on the age-old vampire mythos and challenges the reader with ethical quandaries.While I did at times struggle with this story due to what I felt was missing context (being unfamiliar with the source material, as I am), Starling's signature development of the novella's core characters, Leigh and Robin, kept me engaged enough until the final third of the novella, where the intrigue significantly ramps up. Despite those contextual issues early on, by the end, it is the characters that matter, and Leigh's struggle with her own emotions and desires—elements not too often explored among vampires—is deliciously captivating. Like A Sheep Among Wolves, it ends on a high note, though for entirely different reasons that, again, I will not spoil here.If you are a fan of WoD/VtM, I honestly do not know if this compilation is worth checking out. If you are a fan of stories that explore depression/Bipolar Disorder, loneliness, self-doubt, the manner in which our emotions can impede our personal goals, highly ambitious characters, and deep character relationships, there is plenty to enjoy here.
A**R
Horrible
I read 59 pages of the first story and gave up. There is no decent hook to capture the attention of the reader, and it was so repetitive...just the same inner diologue and angst. If the other two stories are of the same caiber, I'm out. Perhaps this should be in the YA section for high school kids.
E**H
not too bad
I’ve read quite a few of the World of Darkness novels over the years, but this was my first collection of short stories. I liked the various stories o stay within the structure of he Masquerade. But they weren’t a “page turner” for me that many novels were.
K**R
Vampire stories
Not sure how to review this book, it have 3 parts and different caracters but main theme is vampires, the angle in all 3 is original, writing and storytelling good and not what i expected for this genre, i gove it a weak 4 stars
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