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K**R
Terrible writing
Terrible writing, no plot, no development. Basic plot is: Muder, rob...uh that's the whole plot! Not even worth the 99 cents.
B**S
SERIOUSLY!!!!
It's just like every other eastern cultivation novel on kindle. Trashy editing.
K**R
its just a funny power drama
if you like mindless op just for fun, it's pretty good. my only issue is he is supposed to have been an assassin before he transmigrated, and instead of being an assassin he just does his revenge in the open doesn't even try to hide who he is. but aside from that it's a fun time.
K**R
Nearly unreadable
There are so many poor and wrong translations in this book. It is also riddled with spelling errors, missplaced words and letter, even the formatting is bad. I am genuinly suprised that this could be posted on Amazon at this state. This is in dire need of proof reading and editing. This seems to be stripped right from a poor light novel app.
R**S
Great y
I like the story and give it 5 stars. The 5th 6th volume are missing. Please add them as soon as possible.
J**R
This series is like cigarettes. Horrible but addicting.
The headline about says it all. I've read up to book 16; the translation is horrible, it's in serious need of editing, it's vaguely racist in some parts, and entire major arcs are repetitive. All that being said it's just entertaining enough to make you keep reading it.
R**M
There are more forms of punctuation than the exclamation point!
Why does every sentence end in an exclamation point?!And so, so choppy!Loved the premise, but the author blew by the critical early transition in a couple sentences. Pretty pissed off that I paid money for this!
K**R
Hard to read
Clearly a translation. Story is enjoyable if you like main characters that don't have to struggle. As I do enjoy those stories from time to time I gave it 5 stars. If you can't handle bad grammar and weird translations don't get this book.
P**N
Some amusing points but hampered by very poor writing
I assume the writing issues are reflective of translation issues. I have read quite few works translated from mandarin and this is the poorest by far. The overpowered protagonist can be a fun diversion as a story but it is a real struggle to read.
A**N
While story is ok the translation is not
- Sometimes complete paragraphs are nonsensical- Translated names for skills are inconsistent- Every now and then sentences contain multiple times the same word. It is clear in the original there are different words. Unknown if this is a bad translation or an error.
K**T
A fine story but with lots of translation errors
A fine fast story. A lot of times hard to follow because of the translation errors. He and she are used wrongful to name an example. Sometimes the sentences just don't match. It's like the words where translated with Google translate. Words meabe right but the order of the words don't make sense. Could be better.
M**D
Meine Gedanken zu Band 1-7
Liebe die Story Immer noch auch nach Band 7!Aber an der Übersetzung von Namen und anreden muss man noch nacharbeiten, ist manchmal nervig wenn man nicht weiß wer angesprochen wird und du es dir erst zusammenreimen musst wie schnell das auch gehen mag!(gilt für Band 1-7)Werde aber trotzdem weiterlesen und kann es nur empfehlen!!!😊
J**N
One-click Cultivation System: Volume 1
The story is fine. Unfortunately, the English translation is bad and kills the fun of reading the book.
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